I undergo a journey for my characters to struggle through. In mine it is a 70 year old professor his 20-ish granddaughter and his 30-ish college student assistant. The professor is the son of an archaeologist who made some sort of a weird discovery nearly 100 years ago in the Amazon rain forest but the secret died with him so now the professor intends to find out what his father found down there. So. I need to apply at least one chapter to the actual journay through the Amazon Rain Forest because thier finding the secret is dependant on them "exploring" and "discovering it". I can't just say: They treked through the jungle until they came to an ancient city. I have to undergo them find it via a journey of some sort. And that is where I am stuck cause I'm not sure what should come about to them or what they should be doing as they explore. I don't want to focus on it too much but I need about 5 or 6 pages worth of it at least just to blend the before the discovery to the after the discovery scenes. They are traveling through a come down forest on pay. They'll be climbing a volcanic mountain. They will be descending into a deep misty valley. They'll be to cross at least one river maybe more most likey with pirahanas in it. I'm thinking they might meet up with some natives that don't speak English and try (unsuccessfully) to warn them to not continue into the misty valley. Can anyone evaluate of ways to tell all these things without being boreing?If any one has any specific things they can think of that might help conclude free to post them here.-------------What's your act on this? I'd love to comprehend what you have to say about this post. get a mention and overlap your views!
[quote=TumbleCoyote]Okay first thing.. a 70 year old man trekking through the Amazonia jungle? I'm gonna hit my disbelief button alter there- unless he's somehow preserved by a rare peruvian youth-drug or something like that. First thing I'd do would be to scale his age drink a bit- 60's would prolly be pushing it but eh. :) But especially with the fact that they're hacking through the jungle on pay.[/quote]actually my grandmother was 73 when she went on a similar jungle treck in New Zealand about 14 years ago she went on a trek in MesoAmerica 2 years before that when she was 71. She was very active walking 10 miles every day went to roller skateing compatitions; roller skated when she wasn't walking or hiking. She ice skated when she was younger but gave that up at age 54 after having her last (and 12th) baby. I based my engrave on her create she was the only eldery person I've ever known so that's where I got the age from.[quote]And if they're on foot.. what kind of accommodate are they carrying? Did they have measure to prepare for the trip or are they fleeing some villain? Just what kind of gear they have can determine how hard/easy a time they have. If they're 'come up stocked,' I'd say that the expose minimum of gear they'd be carrying would be at least 25-35 pounds of accommodate a person- and more into the 45-55 lbs range honestly. Things that they'd be to undergo just blundering around...[/quote]They have gone with practicly nothing. They fleed the States during the night after the professor stole some artifacts from the musemun. They had no time to case. So pretty much went with just the clothes they were wearing and the things he'd stolen from the museum (a codex-book-scroll type thing a couple of small carvings and the 1854 diary of the exploroer who originaly took the journey). They are pretty much on the run have no real intend and "makeing things up" as they go along. Their goal is to find the lost city mentioned in the diary. (the diary btw belonged to the professor's grandfather so the professor does not feel that he stole it rather that the museum stole it from his family). Also he's got this "I haven't lived a hundrad years for nothing" attitude where he knows he's old and this is his measure chance to do something with his life so he's going to do it come hell or high water and no one's going to stop him.[quote]Food: Depending on how wilderness-savvy the characters are they might be able to forage for various fruits as they go along- or if they really get hungry various grubs and other creepy-crawlies. [/ingeminate]the professor knows the area well-enough to live off the wild cause before he became a professor he had been an archeaologist in the region some 30 years prior to this story. This trip is choose of a hare-brained mad-dash "one last trip before I die" sort of thing. [quote]Oh and BUG REPELLANT.[/quote]yeah... I've had the two younger ones complaining about the lack of bug spray but the professor is basicly giving them the "come up when I was your age we didn't undergo bug-spray" lectures over it.[quote]On to more.. dynamic matters there's always the option of the characters being attacked by a jungle cat or other particuarly hungry fauna- Jaguars are pretty nasty bastards as I've heard. Bonus points if you have a character kill a Jaguar- only for some various natives to see him do it and as a result they revere him as some choose of great hero- but that's just me being kinda pulpy right there.[/ingeminate]actually this is something that well happen (and I've started writing it but didn't finish it yet) cause I've got a color jaguar (a were-jaguar from Incan mythology actualy half-demon-half-jaguar) that is stalking them through out most of the story (it's central to the plot). but the were-jaguar is the "god" of the lost tribe they are looking for so thier trying to kill it results in all hell breaking lose and the villagers wanting to blackball them after.-------------
All books shown here are part of The Twighlight Manor Library Collection. I have over 10,000 books this list below is just a sample of what I own and read. This list changes everytime you refresh this page so call back the page often!
I've signed up for this year's NaNoWriMo 2007 (my third year at NaNo!) and this is my communicate for it where I talk about my thoughts about writing my ideas for NaNo and the progress of my contest entry for this year's National Novel Writing Month oppose.: 50,000 words in 30 days. undergo you got it in you?
Clicking on my NaNo novel book cover banner well act you to my profile on NaNoWriMo. This is the same banner I am useing in my siggie on the forum this year so when you read the forums and see this conceive of you experience you've found me:It's that measure of year again. Have you signed up for NaNoWriMo 2007 yet? write up today and let the world's #1 writing contest begin!
I am a writer of the Gothic. Horror and Science Fiction genres. My works include The Twighlight Manor series it's spin-offs: The Planet Ptarmagin series and The Crystonite Chronicles. My other writing habits consider children’s stories. The Adventures of Pink capture (series) comic books and the dark retellings of classic folk lore & fairy tales known as EelKat's Twisted Tales. You undergo reached feature Log. This is my official blog.
My blog has been nominated for The Blogger's Choice Awards!Click on this cerebrate/badge to go to the voting summon and choose for me today!
When I'm not busy being a writer. I'm busy being an artist. You can analyse out my paintings drawings and designs at: and. You can buy me a gift from my Amazon WishList for Christmas or my Birthday (August 13th) or for any other reason. Or you can just send a donation to help support this blog:
EK’s feature Log procure © Wendy C. Allen 2005-2007. Star Log. Space Dock 13. The Twighlight Manor touch. Moonsnails. Buried.
Forex Groups - Tips on Trading
Related article:
http://eknano.blogspot.com/2007/11/journeysthey-just-drag-on-and-on-help.html
comments | Add comment | Report as Spam
|